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Vlad Linko Posted 9 years ago
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Need help in checking the IELTS graph description.
I`d much appreciate, if someone could check another one of my takes on describing a graph, thanks in advance!
The first graph describes the total value of fuel exports and the second graph shows the value of three selected exports: fuel, food, and manufactured goods. Both graphs cover the period of 5 years between the year 2000 and 2005 and both are measured in millions of dollars.
In the first graph we can see, that from 2000 to 2002 the value of fuel exports had lost about 50.000 million dollars in valeue. This decrease was followed by a steep rise in the value and by 2005 the overall value had risen almost 125.000 million from the original.
From the second graph it can be seen, that there has been a significant and steady decline in fuel exports over the given period from approximately 45.000 million to less that 20.000 million dollars. It must be noted, that in the given period the value of manufactured goods, although not significantly, exceeded the value of fuel exports. At the same time, the value of food remained stagnant.
The first graph describes the total value of fuel exports and the second graph shows the value of three selected exports: fuel, food, and manufactured goods. Both graphs cover the period of 5 years between the year 2000 and 2005 and both are measured in millions of dollars.
In the first graph we can see, that from 2000 to 2002 the value of fuel exports had lost about 50.000 million dollars in valeue. This decrease was followed by a steep rise in the value and by 2005 the overall value had risen almost 125.000 million from the original.
From the second graph it can be seen, that there has been a significant and steady decline in fuel exports over the given period from approximately 45.000 million to less that 20.000 million dollars. It must be noted, that in the given period the value of manufactured goods, although not significantly, exceeded the value of fuel exports. At the same time, the value of food remained stagnant.
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The first graph describes the annual total value of fuel exports and the second graph shows the annual value of three selected exports: fuel, food, and manufactured goods. Both graphs cover the period of 5 years between the years 2000 and 2005 (... 5 years, 2000-2005, ) and both are measured in millions of dollars.
In the first graph we can se
In the first graph we can se
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