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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago

Need Help Iambic Pentameter Poem

Can anyone help me with this poem about an I-pad (or an Iphone)
This is what I have so far:

Oh, how can I describe this splendid thing?
It is the best invention ever made,
Its coat is pink with sparkly dots within,
At last year's new year's eve she gladly paid,

and the rhyming pattern has to be abab cdcd efef gg
Thanks so much! Emotion: smile
  

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So far so good with the rhyme (giving you poetic license on 'thing' and 'within') and meter. Capitalize 'New Year's Eve'. Let's see your next quatrain.

  • So far so good with the rhyme (giving you poetic license on 'thing' and 'within') and meter.
  • Capitalize 'New Year's Eve'.
  • Let's see your next quatrain.
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So far so good with the rhyme (giving you poetic license on 'thing' and 'within') and meter. Capitalize 'New Year's Eve'. Let's see your next quatrain.

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