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Chuenwing Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Need help for the correction of English Writing Sentence.

0 I remember that I had to reach there by train for 8 hours.02br
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00I walked out of the house and lie down under the tree.02br
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00I could feel the breeze blew over my face.02br
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00Few minutes later,I fell asleep and the sounds of the birds.02br
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00I could see the stars twinkled in the sky clearly.0-
  

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0I am learning to write a Journal novel.02br
00Can you please help me to correct it?02br
00Or these sentences are just fine?02br
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10- I remember that I had to reach there by train for 8 hours.12br
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10I remember that I took 8 hours to reach there by train. I'm not sure if this is what you meant. 01blockquote
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10- I walked out of the house and 11b10lay12b10 dow
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0I remember that I had to reach there by train for 8 hours. (in 8 hours' time)02br
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00I walked out of the house and lie down under the tree(in the garden ???).02br
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00I could feel the breeze blew over my face.(blowing)02br
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00Few minutes later,I fell asleep and the sounds of the birds. (and...... should be a sentence here)0
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0how many hours yuo play0-
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10how many hours yuo play12br
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10Do you have a question about this?02br
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00"How many hours did you play?"0-
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