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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Need help for Letter of Motivation, please!
Hey everybody, as I am allowed to do a semester in Norway, the business school asked me to write a Letter of Motivation. Because the Business School is very sophisticated in all manners, I would like to ask you guys if you could have a short look on my LoM and give me some feedback. Thank you all very much in advance Regards, Al Dear Sir or Madam, please kindly find my application for a one-semester-stay at [Business School] I am attending the Master of Science programme in Business Administration at the University of [...], Germany. My majors are Controlling, Finance and Accounting. Through continuously motivating myself, I have been able to accomplish excellent grades during my bachelor and master studies. However, I am convinced that I will meet BI´s high demands to complete satisfaction as well. While working as a student research assistant at the chair of Accounting and Auditing in [...], my desire to attend in a PhD programme has increased steadily. To achieve this purpose, I feel that I should expand my financial knowledge.[Business School] is very well known in the world for its excellent research on finance and financial economics. Therefore, I am persuaded that your university is the best way to achieve a profound financial knowledge. Furthermore I have chosen [Business Schools] Master of Science programme because most of the courses offered, can be taken into account at the University of [..., Germany]. However, I am very much interested in attending in Introduction to Asset Pricing, Fixed Income Securities, Derivatives, Corporate Governance and Multivariate Statistics. In my opinion, these courses will complement my studies at its best and help me to develop a unique profile, which in turn may lead to a comparative advantage on the labour market. Of course, there are not just professional reasons why I am interested in a place in your programme. I am very excited to become acquainted with the educational system of Norway. As it was decorated several times for its schooling system in the past, I feel that this may have positive implications on the university system, which I really would like to get to know as well. Beyond that, I am certain that the Norwegian mentality with its distinctive sense of education will coin myself in a positive manner. With hope that you will give me the chance to take some of the Norwegian spirit to Germany I would be very happy to hear from you soon. Respectfully yours [Me :-)] |
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