need help for correct motivation letter

Dir sir or madam
Being convinced that education is future, I wish to apply for a economy innovation and growth program after completing my BA program in International management. Academically, I have always been a very determined and studious individual, hence why I knew that a degree at your university would be the definite next step. The many brilliant representatives of the business community around the world have strengthened that resolve.



My postsecondary education is quite difference compare to normal people, because it can be divided into two stages, one is in the college and other is in the university. From 2003 to 2005, I studied Marketing Economist in Denmark, after getting diploma, I choose the BA program of business administration in . Until now I have learned finance, accounting, cost accounting, marketing, economy and so on. Economy is one of most attractive subject to me, after I have studied for almost 2years. Being in almost 5 years in Denmark, I like Scandinavian mythology and ’s fairy tale, at the same time I would like to go to other nodic countries to find the difference and get more international experience.



I am eager to deepen my knowledge and specialize in the subject of economy, so I would like to continue my studies in this area and receive MSc and PhD degrees, one of my friends in your school told me the quality of education is quite high. It means that your school can help me to fullfill my dream.



Thank you for kindly perusing trough my application. I looking forward to your positive response.



Yours sincerely