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September_li Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Need help for a business letter

0 This is an email I am going to write to my manager for requesting a new computer. I am not a good writer, so please go ahead to correct it. Any advices are welcomed. 02br
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00September 02br
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00Request for a new computer 02br
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00Hi ***, 02br
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00I am writing this letter to request for a new computer. 02br
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00As you know, I work on a computer at least five years old. With the continually slowing speed and memory issues I am encountering, I have concerns that how long the machine will be reliably functional. The old system has Windows 98. When my computer crashed, it took much more time for technicians to fix it, since they are working with new system (Windows 2000/XP) now. And I asked about shifting systems, they told me, the attempt to install a new system would create more problems than it solved. 02br
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00I certainly understand the desire and need to cut cost, but computers have become a primary working tool and essential for daily communications. And I can be more productive if I have a fast computer. 02br
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00Please consider my application. Thank you. 02br
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0 Request for a new computer 02br 02br 00Hi ***, 02br 02br 00I am writing this letter to request a new computer. 02br 02br 00As you may know, I am currently working on a computer which is at least five years old. With the continuous slowing speed and memory issues I am encountering, I have concerns about how long the machine will be reliably functional.

  • 0 Request for a new computer 02br 02br 00Hi ***, 02br 02br 00I am writing this letter to request a new computer.
  • 02br 02br 00As you may know, I am currently working on a computer which is at least five years old.
  • With the continuous slowing speed and memory issues I am encountering, I have concerns about how long the machine will be reliably functional.
  • The old system has Windows 98.
  • When my computer crashed, it took much longer for the technicians to fix it since they are working now with a new system (Windows 2000/XP).
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0 Request for a new computer 02br
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00Hi ***, 02br
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00I am writing this letter to request a new computer. 02br
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00As you may know, I am currently working on a computer which is at least five years old. With the continuous slowing speed and memory issues I am encountering, I have concerns about how long the machine will be
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