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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Hi,
I am writing a cover letter, and I need to know if this sentence is gramatically correct. The specific part of the sentence is where I have a comma followed by 'a position'. This part isn't a comma splice is it?
"I was often the intermediary between pure life scientists, computer scientists, and mathematicians, a position where I was required to understand information originating in one area, combine it with my own ideas, and convey it to members of another discipline. "
thank you!
I am writing a cover letter, and I need to know if this sentence is gramatically correct. The specific part of the sentence is where I have a comma followed by 'a position'. This part isn't a comma splice is it?
"I was often the intermediary between pure life scientists, computer scientists, and mathematicians, a position where I was required to understand information originating in one area, combine it with my own ideas, and convey it to members of another discipline. "
thank you!
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Hi, It's fine. Have you considered 'I have often been the intermediary . .
- Hi, It's fine.
- Have you considered 'I have often been the intermediary .
- .
- ', to give the fact more current relevance?
- Clive
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Hi,
It's fine.
Have you considered 'I have often been the intermediary . . . ', to give the fact more current relevance?
Clive
It's fine.
Have you considered 'I have often been the intermediary . . . ', to give the fact more current relevance?
Clive
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