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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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need help

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Do you have a boyfriend\girlfriend? Do you feel that he is the one? Do you think about sharing your future together?

I wander how you can know that your current spouse is the best for you. Perhaps there is someone else, who'll be much more perfect to you.

That's the reason that I'm waiting to javascript:void(0). The problem is that maybe he'll never come. Maybe there is no one who has got the attributes that I'm searching.

All the guys that I've met were not good enough, not handsome enough, not smart or nice enough.

If I'll keep waiting, I'll find myself fifty years old and alone.

The conclusion is not to be too picky.





Thanks(:
  

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It seems to me that your actual target audience is of the female gender, so you can strike the [/girlfriend] from the first sentence. It is awkward to begin with, and seemingly not necessary given the rest of the text. pefect is a superlative, so it should not be used in a comparative sense We wait for prince charming.

  • It seems to me that your actual target audience is of the female gender, so you can strike the [/girlfriend] from the first sentence.
  • It is awkward to begin with, and seemingly not necessary given the rest of the text.
  • pefect is a superlative, so it should not be used in a comparative sense We wait for prince charming.
  • If I keep waiting (not the future) in the if-clause.
  • [Have you heard the old advice?
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It seems to me that your actual target audience is of the female gender, so you can strike the [/girlfriend] from the first sentence. It is awkward to begin with, and seemingly not necessary given the rest of the text.

pefect is a superlative, so it should not be used in a comparative sense

We wait for prince charming.

If I keep waiting (not the future) i

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