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Aznlilboiz Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Can any one help me to proofread and fix some grammar for me. I have serious problems with past tense verb. thank you.

The time when I felt out of place, is when I came over to America. The first day I arrived here, it was cold and snowing. I didn’t have much of friends and most of the time I stayed at home. I played with my cousins most of the time or going out with my parent. I start thinking, is America a good place for me? A month later, I started going to school. The school I went to is called Harvard-Kent in Charlestown. I started in the 1st grade. Everything looks strange to me and I felt scared and really want to go home. The first day, not a lot of students talked to me. Most of the students are Asian American and they speak English and Chinese very well. I scared I can’t communicate with them, because I didn’t know English. A lot of stuff I needed to learn all over again.

Two weeks gone by and I started enjoying being in school. More classmates are started to chatting with me. All of them are very friendly and nice. The teacher pulled a lot of times in me because I needed to catch up with other students. The most of the time that I am having trouble is the homework. My parents always helped me with the math, but they can’t helped me with other homework. Most of time I had an incomplete homework, but the teacher still let me pass and let me went into the 2nd grade. I started have a feeling that made me really want to stay and kept learning.
  
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