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Hanuman_2000 Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

need help

Hello ,

I am go to recite a poem tomorrow before some teachers and my classmates. The poem is realted to some grandmother. Before reading this poem to audience , I want to say few introductory words such as.

Respected teachers and my friends,

I am going to recite a poem which is related to a grandmother who is very simple and humle and courageous. We children are very attached to our grandmother. We love our grandmother and respect her.

Is it ok? Correct if some error is found.

Thanks
  

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Respected teachers and my friends, I am going to recite a poem about my grandmother, who is very simple and humble and courageous. We children are very attached to our grandmother. We love and respect her.

— Mister Micawber

  • Respected teachers and my friends, I am going to recite a poem about my grandmother, who is very simple and humble and courageous.
  • We children are very attached to our grandmother.
  • We love and respect her.
  • Good luck on your recitation, Hanuman.
  • Remember to smile and look at the audience.
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Respected teachers and my friends,
I am going to recite a poem about my grandmother, who is very simple and humble and courageous. We children are very attached to our grandmother. We love and respect her.

Good luck on your recitation, Hanuman. Remember to smile and look at the audience.
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Hello(Mr.M),

I am very grateful to you for quick reply. This is not particularily for my grandmother but for a grandmother in general. Keeeping this point in mind can I say "about my grandmother".

Your help is very valuable for me.

Thanks and regards.
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Do you mean for (dedicated to) or about (topic)? I presumed that the poem was about your own grandmother, but amend your speech to suit the facts.
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