Need feedback on map IELTS writing task 1

Hi, I'm a newcomer to this forum and I hope to gain some experiences in solving this type of task 1. This is the first time I have done this so flaws are unavoidable. Please check and give me some advice on achieving a high score in doing this, thanks.

The given map illustrates the growth of a seaside village from 1995 to the present.

Overall, the images display a small-scale community which is situated nearby the sea. The infrastructure includes a main road which leads to the seashore and another road which is parallel to the sea.

Overwhelmingly, there are more household at present than there used to be with more houses were built and more apartments replacing the fish market. Also worth noting is the addition of a car park and an alternative road in the north.

Another significant point is the replacement of farmland and forest park with a golf yard and a tennis yard. Shops also gave way to restaurants, which were opposite the apartments. However, the location of the cafe seemed unchanged whereas there was a removal of the fishing port in the seashore.