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Need feed back on thesis

Compare and Contrast Essay on two stories." Barbie-Q" and " The Rocking-Horse Winner"
My theme : Childhood
2 main aspects: Social Class, Adulthood

Thesis : Through the use of toys the children in both stories learn to escape their incomplete childhoods; as a result they realize their goal is unattainable and a challenge to fulfill, especially due to their social classes.

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" Barbie-Q" and " The Rocking-Horse Winner" My theme : Childhood 2 main aspects: Social Class, Adulthood Thesis : Through the use of toys the children in both stories learn to escape their incomplete childhoods; as a result they realize their goal is unattainable and a challenge to fulfill, especially due to their social classes. I need feedback about my thesis A few quick comments. I don't find your statement is a good one.

  • " Barbie-Q" and " The Rocking-Horse Winner" My theme : Childhood 2 main aspects: Social Class, Adulthood Thesis : Through the use of toys the children in both stories learn to escape their incomplete childhoods; as a result they realize their goal is unattainable and a challenge to fulfill, especially due to their social classes.
  • I need feedback about my thesis A few quick comments.
  • I don't find your statement is a good one.
  • - What does it mean to 'escape one's incomplete childhood'?
  • - If something is unobtainable, do you need to say that it is a challenge to fulfill?
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Compare and Contrast Essay on two stories." Barbie-Q" and " The Rocking-Horse Winner"
My theme : Childhood
2 main aspects: Social Class, Adulthood

Thesis : Through the use of toys the children in both stories learn to escape their incomplete childhoods; as a result they realize their goal is unattainable and a challenge to fulfill, especially due to their social classes.

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