Need favour in correcting following sentences

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I have written a motivation letter which quite long. So I am only mentioning the sentences about which I have confusion in terms of grammatical accuracy. I appreciate your kind help.

1. I also applied in last year. I was offered the admission, but did not receive scholarship.

2.In the meantime, I have taken IELTS exam (score xx) and completed my thesis writing, and accomplished Master’s in Public Administration from ABC.

3. I hold bachelor of social sciences, major in Public Administration.

4. This first track programme is a path for me where I will have the opportunity to equip strong analytical and research skills, continuing with doctoral studies.

5. My interaction with different people from diverse background taught me the truth that how language is important for social integration and interaction.

6.I had several write up on different issues published in newspaper

7. My late father happened to work in Bangladesh AV and retired in 1993 as the QQ officer rank.

8. I have attached a bank statement of my father that shows the amount of money he left in his account when he passed away.

9.I do not have any personal savings by which I can support my higher education expenses in Geneva.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

1. I also applied last year. I was offered admission, but I did not receive a scholarship.

2.In the meantime, I have taken the IELTS exam (score xx), completed my thesis, and obtained my Master in Public Administration from ABC.

3. I hold a Bachelor of Social Sciences with a major in Public Administration.

4. This first-track programme is a path in which I will have the opportunity to acquire strong analytic and research skills as I pursue doctoral studies.

5. My interaction with people from diverse backgrounds has taught me that language is important for social integration and interaction.

6.I had several articles published in newspapers.

7. My late father happened to work in Bangladesh AV and retired in 1993 at the rank of QQ officer.

8. I have attached a bank statement of my father that shows the amount of money he left in his account when he passed away.

9.I do not have any personal savings by which I can support my higher education expenses in Geneva.

Mizanur · Answer

Thank you very much MR. Micawber

Mizanur · Answer

Mister Micawber,

I have an application deadline tomorrow, I wrote an answer for the application.
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I would be grateful if you give me few moment to proof the following paras:
Question: Outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals.

My answer:

I am currently working as a part time faculty at ABC University in Bangladesh since May. I already received summer semester’s ’Teaching Evaluation Report’ by students. I had taken two sections, where students from two separate sections marked me on my capacity as an instructor and I am glad to announce that I received ‘Very Good’ and ‘Excellent’, respectively. It is such an encouragement for me that validated my decision of joining the teaching profession.

I have recently applied for full time position. I am optimistic to get the permanent position. Nevertheless, if I fail to get the permanent position regardless of my good class performance, lack of having degree from reputable institutions of aforementioned countries (UK, USA, Canada and Australia) would might be a possible reason. A degree from UK will give me more stable position at ABC University. ABC University is the only university in our country where all faculty members have foreign Master’s or Doctorate degree mainly from USA, Canada, UK and Australia. Therefore the Chevening scholarship programme will give the chance to receive degree from a distinguished educational institute of UK that will ultimately give me a competitive advantage in my present job.

After completion of the study, I will straightly return back to Bangladesh and I will resume my current job, and will put concentration on teaching profession. I believe I can join in my current since I have been working here. I hope the authority will allow me this privilege.

I received many things from my country. I received government subsidized education and different government scholarship schemes. I feel that I have deep liability to society. As I said earlier part, I had attached to various voluntary organizations and have many community engagement. But these were not enough to satisfy my thrust. I want to do more for my nation.
Whatsoever, I went to Norway to pursue my degree in Public Administration and came back to Bangladesh after successfully completed my programme. After returning to Bangladesh, many of my relatives and close peoples scolded me for coming back.

I believe I belong to here, I want make contribution for my mother land within my limited capacity. By the grace of almighty, I received call from North South University for facing interview just one month after I had arrived in Bangladesh. Now I am so much in love with my present job.

As I want to stay in academia, I have to complete Ph.D. at some point of time. Along with teaching, I will be developing my doctoral proposal. I will try get doctoral position in a good university. I am not thinking anything but research and teaching. I am also interested to work as a free-lance consultant for national NGOs in Bangladesh. My long term goal is to become a full time academician with maximum dedication for teaching and research work, and a free-lance development practitioner.

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