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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
NEED EXTREME HELP WITH GRAMMAR PLEASE
Could you please help me make these sentences natural and grammatical?
1 If one client had breakfast at the hotel, the hotel would be reimbursed for all they've bought. That's how expensive the breakfast is here.
2 Align the receipt with the edge of the page and staple the 2 together.
3 From when to when will you not be home tomorrow?
4 He is fortunate to have been bequeathed a large sum of money so early in his life.
5 He was playing the violin over music so loud you could barely hear him playing. (the artist playing the violin to a song of his)
6 A client's account is allowed to be overdrawn for a maximum of 36 days straight./is allowed to be in overdraft for...
7 There is a storyline revolved around her./a storyline that revolves around her. (are these natural?)
8 If put the key card next to some change in your wallet, it'll demagnetize.
Thank you so much
1 If one client had breakfast at the hotel, the hotel would be reimbursed for all they've bought. That's how expensive the breakfast is here.
2 Align the receipt with the edge of the page and staple the 2 together.
3 From when to when will you not be home tomorrow?
4 He is fortunate to have been bequeathed a large sum of money so early in his life.
5 He was playing the violin over music so loud you could barely hear him playing. (the artist playing the violin to a song of his)
6 A client's account is allowed to be overdrawn for a maximum of 36 days straight./is allowed to be in overdraft for...
7 There is a storyline revolved around her./a storyline that revolves around her. (are these natural?)
8 If put the key card next to some change in your wallet, it'll demagnetize.
Thank you so much
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1 If one client had breakfast at the hotel, the hotel would be reimbursed for all they've bought. That's how expensive the breakfast is here. ] 2 Align the receipt with the edge of the page and staple the 2 together.
- 1 If one client had breakfast at the hotel, the hotel would be reimbursed for all they've bought.
- That's how expensive the breakfast is here.
- ] 2 Align the receipt with the edge of the page and staple the 2 together.
- [ok] 3 From when to when will you not be home tomorrow?
- [ok, grammatically I guess, but I don't like it...
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1 If one client had breakfast at the hotel, the hotel would be reimbursed for all they've bought. That's how expensive the breakfast is here. [ok, or "...how expensive it is here." - using it is a little ambiguous, but it is common.]
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Isn't there a word missing
The music was so loud that you could barely hear him playing over top of it] never heard this?
Does demagnitize work, as I've only heard it in french?
The music was so loud that you could barely hear him playing over top of it] never heard this?
Does demagnitize work, as I've only heard it in french?
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alc24Isn't there a word missingWhere?
alc24The music was so loud that you could barely hear him playing over top of it] never heard this?"it" refers back to the music. As for missing words, you could add in "over the top of it" Maybe that is more grammatically correct, but if you want i
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