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Joeviee Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Need explainations:)

Hi ,

Can anyone tell me anything wrong with my sentence composition?

Still couldn't quite sure if it was purely an incomplete update or some errors might have occured during in which the page was downloading, still not given up yet, i tried the day following, same thing shown on the page. I was little bit sad.

Fw days later i got a call from her. She had broken up with her ex. ....

Thanks:)
  

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I think you are trying to stuff too much information into a single sentence and you have a few grammatical errors. I couldn't be quite sure whether it was just an incomplete update or if some errors had occured during the page download. I didn't give up though.

— Nona the brit

  • I think you are trying to stuff too much information into a single sentence and you have a few grammatical errors.
  • I couldn't be quite sure whether it was just an incomplete update or if some errors had occured during the page download.
  • I didn't give up though.
  • I tried again the following day but the same message/error/problem was shown.
  • I was quite upset about it.
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I think you are trying to stuff too much information into a single sentence Emotion: smile and you have a few grammatical errors.

I could
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oooooohhh..............got it:)

Thanks a lot nona....

By the way, are you a male or female? U hv a unisex nickname~
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