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Janelle Rowe Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Need Cover Letter Proofread... Please help

I'm trying to write a cover letter for a graduate assistantship position. I'm quite horrible at writing cover letters and would greatly appreciate the help!

Thanks,

Janelle

Janelle Rowe
Address here
March 16, 2011

Amanda Wallace
Assistant Director
University of Alabama
Tuscaloosa, AL 35487

RE: Application for Housing and Residential Communities Graduate Assistantship

Dear Ms. Wallace:

I am writing to apply for the Graduate Assistantship for Housing and Residential Communities. I was recently accepted into the Doctoral School Psychology Program at the University of Alabama.

I did my undergraduate work in Psychology and currently have a position in Customer Service at Wegman's Food Markets in Geneseo, NY. I can deal well with people. I also learn quickly. I greatly enjoyed my dorm experience during my undergraduate studies and I hope to help future undergraduate students enjoy their experience as well.

I believe that this Graduate Assistantship would greatly help me in achieving my academic goals. I thank you for the opportunity to submit this application for your consideration. Please contact me if there is anything else I need to provide. I look forward to communicating with you in the near future.

Sincerely,

Janelle M. Rowe
  

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this should help.... if u still need it: Dear Whoever: The opening paragraph should arouse the interest of the employer. State why you are writing and give information to show your interest in this specific organization.

  • this should help....
  • if u still need it: Dear Whoever: The opening paragraph should arouse the interest of the employer.
  • State why you are writing and give information to show your interest in this specific organization.
  • If it is a letter of application, name the position for which you are applying and how you heard of it.
  • The middle paragraphs should create a desire on the part of the employer to know more about you.
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this should help.... if u still need it:

Dear Whoever:

The opening paragraph should arouse the interest of the employer. State why you are writing and give information to show your interest in this specific organization. If it is a letter of application, name the position for which you are applying and how you heard of it.

The middle paragraphs should create a desire on

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