Need corrections to my poem.

Hi Guys,

For my girl friend's birthday, I wrote a small poem. She is very good at English. I am more like intermediate.

So, could anyone please correct/ suggest any modifications?

The theme is like, I first saw her in a white dress three years back. we had some fights but we never extended them for more than a day. she celebrated my birthday specially and gave me a hand-designed glass jar with lights and paper butterfly in it with a switch to on and off. I missed her 25th birthday due to some reasons.

I'm going to propose her on her 26th birthday with a ring along with a small poem. she likes them.

Three years back my life was dull and bland.
Then I found your heart, my promised land.

When I first saw you in the white dress, you were beautiful and sweet.
It would have been a crime if I didn't confess that my heart skipped a beat.

We had our fair share of fights and differences some days.
But we never let each other walk around in a daze.

You made sure my 25th birthday was special and memorable.
You gave me a Jar of light and hope with happiness inevitable.

I made an unforgivable mistake by letting your birthday slip.
You were disheartened, and that made your tears drip.

I promise you I will never make you cry again.
All I need is your trust and excitement to regain.

Any help is appreciated.

Thank you

Sasidhar.