Need Correction: Susan on the phone.

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Hi Teachers,Could you correct the story please?Narrator:It is eleven o’clock. Susan is talking to her boyfriend Tom. She is in London and he is in Paris.Susan:What’s the weather like in Paris? Is it raining?Tom:No, it isn’t. The weather is fine.Narrator:Frank and his wife are getting ready for bed. He can hear Susan downstairs.Frank:Is she still talking to Tom?His wife:Yes, she is.Frank:About one hour and a half talking!His wife:Come on Frank, be a good boy and sleep.Thanks in advance

KrisBlueNZ · Accepted Answer

It's good, the only things I'd change are the last two lines.

Frank: They've been talking for an hour and a half!

Frank's wife: Come on Frank, be a good boy and GO TO sleep.

Also, Tom's reply regarding the weather would probably be more like "No, it's fine [here]". No need to repeat "the weather" in his reply.

Tenacious Learner · Answer

Hi KrisBlueNZ

Thank you for your reply, commentaries, and time. I'll change them immediely.

Best regards

TS

KrisBlueNZ · Answer

No worries. "Immediately" ;-)

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Narrator:	It is eleven o’clock. Susan is talking to her boyfriend Tom. She is in London and he is in Paris.
Susan:	What’s the weather like in Paris? Is it raining?
Tom:	No, it isn’t. The weather is fine.
Narrator:		Frank and his wife are getting ready for bed. He can hear Susan downstairs.
Frank:	Is she still talking to Tom?
His wife:	Yes, she is.
Frank:	About one hour and a half talking!
His wife:	Come on Frank, be a good boy and sleep.