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Tenacious Learner Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Need correction Please

Hi Teachers,

Could you correct this paragraph that I wrote?

Tom and Susan often play tennis. Susan is a very good tennis player and Tom is a bad one. They are playing tennis right now. As usual, Susan is playing very well and Tom is playing badly. When they play together, Susan almost always wins and Tom almost always loses. But two weeks ago, Tom won and Susan lost. They are going to play tennis next week. Who is going to win?

Thanks in advance
  

Top answer

Hi, Tom and Susan often play tennis. Susan is a very good player and Tom is a bad one. They are playing right now.

— Clive

  • Hi, Tom and Susan often play tennis.
  • Susan is a very good player and Tom is a bad one.
  • They are playing right now.
  • As usual, she is playing very well and he is playing poorly.
  • In their games, she almost always wins, but two weeks ago he won.
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Hi,

Tom and Susan often play tennis. Susan is a very good player and Tom is a bad one. They are playing right now. As usual, she is playing very well and he is playing poorly. In their games, she almost always wins, but two weeks ago he won. They are going to play again next week. Who will win?

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Hi Clive,

Thank you so much for your corrections and work. It really looks a lot better.

The thing is that I have quite a few like this one, short ones. Whenever you can, would you help me with this matter?

Best regards

TS
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Hi,

Post them, as long as they are not al the same, and we'll do our best.
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Hi Clive,

Yo see it didn't have a lot of repetition. I'll try to do my best.Emotion: wink

Best regards

TS
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