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Tenacious Learner Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Need correction. Joan's pregnancy
Hi Teachers,
Could you correct this paragraph please?
Joan had to give up her job in 1980 because she had a baby that year. Because of her pregnancy she often said, “You have to find a better job, Arthur. You simply have to!”
Arthur had to find a better job because they didn’t have enough money.
Could you correct this paragraph please?
Joan had to give up her job in 1980 because she had a baby that year. Because of her pregnancy she often said, “You have to find a better job, Arthur. You simply have to!”
Arthur had to find a better job because they didn’t have enough money.
Top answer
It's fine. I wouldn't change anything.
- It's fine.
- I wouldn't change anything.
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Hi,
Joan had to give up her job in 1980 because she had a baby that year. Because of her pregnancy she often said, “You have to find a better job, Arthur. You simply have to!”
Arthur had to find a better job because they didn’t have enough money.
Joan had to give up her job in 1980 because she had a baby that year. Because of he
Joan had to give up her job in 1980 because she had a baby that year. Because of her pregnancy she often said, “You have to find a better job, Arthur. You simply have to!”
Arthur had to find a better job because they didn’t have enough money.
Joan had to give up her job in 1980 because she had a baby that year. Because of he
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Hi Clive,
Thank you. I know, I have toavoid repetitions.
Regar
Thank you. I know, I have toavoid repetitions.
Regar
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