Need correction for my statement to study

hi everyone... i wrote this short paragraphs to answer some questions in my study application, please help me to check

1. I want to improve my skill in architectural design, digital architecture, sustainable architecture, urban architecture and social studies. All of this skills will help me to work on my interest project. I want to work on design for post-disaster housing that combine with technologies of natural material. My country has a lot of potential disaster so the development of post-disaster housing is needed.

2. I see that the concern of post-disaster recovery in my country is not well developed. Therefore, I want to develop a post disaster house design in accordance with the environmental and social condition.
Finishing this study, I want to be a lecturer who work for university. Because, I think university is a good place to continue my work, has a close relationship with community and has young student resources who can be invited to work together for community.

3. I work as a volunteer at XXX, a social program that has been running for two years to build public facilities in village by using bamboo as primary material.
Some areas in my country are lack of public facilities like library and community building, so we run this program to provide those facilities for villager. Bamboo is chosen because it is a local environmental friendly material and relatively cheap.
Preparation and construction is done by local community and volunteer student which most of them majoring in Architecture. In addition, this program not only has social objective but also become a place for architecture student to practice real work in construction process, a lesson that will not be acquired in campus.