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0As I am preparing for TOEFL exam, I practice for essay writing. I woud be happy if 02br
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00Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work.02br
00Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night.02br
00Which do yu prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.02br
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00Many of us will say get up early in the morning is good to health. But we could count 02br
00the followers who really practice in their life. One group will say get up early in the morning 02br
00and start the day's work is really good. While the other group will follow get up later and work until late at night.02br
00I believe there are stronger reasons for get up early in the morning and start the day's work.02br
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00Well, If we get up early in the morning we could realize the lot of changes in our life.02br
00We could do more works if we get up early than to get up late and do work till at night. Since in the night 02br
00automatically we feel tiredness. This is not only because of our work. The main reason for this is due to scarcity of 02br
00oxygen in night time. Moreover in dawn time we could breeze fresh air. More energetic rays from the sun, will give 02br
00us more energy.02br
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00The most imporatnt thing if we get up early in the morning is we could plan our day's work 02br
00in effective way since we have enough time. There is no need to plan any work in our busy day time.02br
00As a student one would be punctual to their school and would be always brisk in whole day class. As a businees02br
00person one could plan in well executive way. Moreover we have lot of time for our health to be improved by undergoing02br
00Yoga classes, medidation, jogging, swimming etc. This will enable us to be more active in our day time.02br
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00I will give best example what I faced in my life. During my graduation tenure, I was so lazy in the initial days.02br
00I won't care about my day work. I used to think like I will do it later. Mean time I will do study late night, but I could not study 02br
00at night due to drousy. But it started to affect my studies and I saw the result of my laziness in my exam results.02br
00My friend suggested to get up early. Though it was difficult to me initially, I practiced myself because my passion my studies 02br
00impetus me. I started to get up early in morning. And I started to do yoga. I feel the day is really gift to me. I studied in the morning. 02br
00All this effort made me to achieve university rank in my post graduation.02br
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00To sum up, the best way to success in our life, we should be a regular and active person all through the day.02br
00To achieve this goal we have to get up early in the morning. Finally I would like to say get up early in the morning02br
00would help us to learn and earn more in the day. 0-