Need correction: At the opera / Frank at home

Hi teachers,

Could you correct these two stories. Any contributions are more than welcome?

Story#1

It is nine o’clock in the evening. Arthur and Deborah are at the opera. Deborah is whispering something to Arthur and he is looking at the man next to her. The man is disturbing her because he is snoring.

Story#2

Frank is watching a football match on television, but his wife and his daughter Susan aren’t. Susan is reading a magazine and his wife is writing something on a piece of paper.

Thanks in advance