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Tenacious Learner Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Need Correction. Arthur at a restaurant

Hi Teachers,

Could you correct this paragraph, please?

Arthur is eating at a restaurant downtown. He is not eating with his wife Deborah. He is having lunch alone. Arthur ordered a steak with some salad and a few vegetables. The waiter brought him his steak with some salad, but he forgot the vegetables. Arthur is telling him to bring the vegetables immediately. Perhaps is not a very good restaurant, there are only a few people in it.

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Arthur is eating lunch alone at a downtown restaurant. He ordered a steak, salad and vegetables. The waiter brought him his steak and salad but forgot the vegetables.

— Canadian45

  • Arthur is eating lunch alone at a downtown restaurant.
  • He ordered a steak, salad and vegetables.
  • The waiter brought him his steak and salad but forgot the vegetables.
  • Arthur is telling him to bring the vegetables immediately.
  • Perhaps it is not a very good restaurant ; only a few people are in it.
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Arthur is eating lunch alone at a downtown restaurant. He ordered a steak, salad and vegetables. The waiter brought him his steak and salad but forgot the vegetables. Arthur is telling him to bring the vegetables immediately. Perhaps it is not a very good restaurant; only a few people are in it.
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Hi canadia45,

Thank you so much for your correction, time, and help. I really appreciate it.Emotion: smile

Best wishes

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