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Hatem922 Posted 21 years ago
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Motivation for applying for a master course in the Norad Fellowship;
As personal goal to devote my life to find new ideas and methods in order to advance mankind’s health in Palestine many reasons about a chance to give the great contribution to the society, my principal incentive is the eagerness to cure the patient both of their bodies and hearts
I tremendously enjoyed my experience in clinical year, especially in department of emergency nursing and also medical surgical department, because in the first department, I had the opportunity to take care of many patients as a nurse and I had gain many experience from the doctors in an emergency room from another one. These opportunities strengthened my skills in applying my knowledge from the clinical year to make a proper diagnosis and management for individual patient. I find this work challenging, interesting, and invigorating and I am determined to become better skilled so that I can lead a group of researchers in the future. I am motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. My friends know me to be a very effective and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can. I am excited by the opportunity to join a group of professional where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm
yours sincerely,
As personal goal to devote my life to find new ideas and methods in order to advance mankind’s health in Palestine many reasons about a chance to give the great contribution to the society, my principal incentive is the eagerness to cure the patient both of their bodies and hearts
I tremendously enjoyed my experience in clinical year, especially in department of emergency nursing and also medical surgical department, because in the first department, I had the opportunity to take care of many patients as a nurse and I had gain many experience from the doctors in an emergency room from another one. These opportunities strengthened my skills in applying my knowledge from the clinical year to make a proper diagnosis and management for individual patient. I find this work challenging, interesting, and invigorating and I am determined to become better skilled so that I can lead a group of researchers in the future. I am motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. My friends know me to be a very effective and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can. I am excited by the opportunity to join a group of professional where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm
yours sincerely,
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Hi. i dont really understand what you tried to say in the first sentence, here is an idea: As personal goal, I would like to devote my life to find new ideas and methods in order to advance mankind’s health in Palestine. I have many reasons for wantimg to give a great contribution to the society, my principal incentive is the eagerness to cure patients both their bodies and hearts I add some thing I thik are mising to the rest check it out.
- Hi.
- i dont really understand what you tried to say in the first sentence, here is an idea: As personal goal, I would like to devote my life to find new ideas and methods in order to advance mankind’s health in Palestine.
- I have many reasons for wantimg to give a great contribution to the society, my principal incentive is the eagerness to cure patients both their bodies and hearts I add some thing I thik are mising to the rest check it out.
- I tremendously enjoyed my experience in clinical year, especially in the department of emergency nursing and in the medical surgical department.
- In the first department, I had the opportunity to take care of many patients as a nurse and I won many experience from the doctors in an emergency room from another one.
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Hi.
i dont really understand what you tried to say in the first sentence, here is an idea:
As personal goal, I would like to devote my life to find new ideas and methods in order to advance mankind’s health in Palestine. I have many reasons for wantimg to give a great contribution to the society, my principal incentive is the eagerness to cure patients both their bodies and
i dont really understand what you tried to say in the first sentence, here is an idea:
As personal goal, I would like to devote my life to find new ideas and methods in order to advance mankind’s health in Palestine. I have many reasons for wantimg to give a great contribution to the society, my principal incentive is the eagerness to cure patients both their bodies and
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