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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
Need assistance - grammar and non-standard english expressions
Hi,
The following is an excerpt from an article on furniture:
"Chaplin’s 1936 movie; Modern Times, one of the last silent films made on the subject was visually vocal in depicting the struggle to survive in the modern, industrialized world. That was then, and more recently Bob Dylan in his latest; Modern times, croons on "Workingman's Blues", resonating the sentiment; the more things change the more they remain the same! Modern times spawned modern lifestyles that throw visuals of self-contained units of people disconnected, and yet ironically connected; electronically. The home is then where the heart is - that is where one truly belongs. And, the Living room then is the oasis - in this age of cacophony."
I would want suggestions on how I could have written this in a better manner.
Also, if someone could be generous enough to point flaws - that would be great!
Thanks in advance!
The following is an excerpt from an article on furniture:
"Chaplin’s 1936 movie; Modern Times, one of the last silent films made on the subject was visually vocal in depicting the struggle to survive in the modern, industrialized world. That was then, and more recently Bob Dylan in his latest; Modern times, croons on "Workingman's Blues", resonating the sentiment; the more things change the more they remain the same! Modern times spawned modern lifestyles that throw visuals of self-contained units of people disconnected, and yet ironically connected; electronically. The home is then where the heart is - that is where one truly belongs. And, the Living room then is the oasis - in this age of cacophony."
I would want suggestions on how I could have written this in a better manner.
Also, if someone could be generous enough to point flaws - that would be great!
Thanks in advance!
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>from an article on furniture that's something, in terms of articles on furniture but you may lose the customers, if you want to use it in selling too complicated for them
- >from an article on furniture that's something, in terms of articles on furniture but you may lose the customers, if you want to use it in selling too complicated for them
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>from an article on furniture
that's something, in terms of articles on furniture
but you may lose the customers, if you want to use it in selling
too complicated for them
that's something, in terms of articles on furniture
but you may lose the customers, if you want to use it in selling
too complicated for them
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