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ElectraKizz Posted 19 years ago
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NEED ASAP!! Please check grammar & edit - this is short to read :)
Excellent description and understanding of the unit assignment, you have gotten your point across, using diabetes as your everyday encounter, and it is very clear what links exist between the two.
This is an interesting choice because my father has diabetes, and I never thought about using a graph to show him, how the pros and cons (highs and lows) of what he is eating and doing can affect his diabetes. Moreover, it is a great way to help him see how this effects his reading on a daily bases.
Thanks to you, now I have a better image of how a graph may benefit him.
This is an interesting choice because my father has diabetes, and I never thought about using a graph to show him, how the pros and cons (highs and lows) of what he is eating and doing can affect his diabetes. Moreover, it is a great way to help him see how this effects his reading on a daily bases.
Thanks to you, now I have a better image of how a graph may benefit him.
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Hi, Excellent description and understanding of the unit assignment, you have gotten your point across, using diabetes as your everyday encounter, and it is very clear what links exist between the two. This is an interesting choice because my father has diabetes, and I never thought about using a graph to show him, how the pros and cons (highs and lows) of what he is eating and doing can affect his diabetes. Moreover, it is a great way to help him see how this effects his reading on a daily bases.
- Hi, Excellent description and understanding of the unit assignment, you have gotten your point across, using diabetes as your everyday encounter, and it is very clear what links exist between the two.
- This is an interesting choice because my father has diabetes, and I never thought about using a graph to show him, how the pros and cons (highs and lows) of what he is eating and doing can affect his diabetes.
- Moreover, it is a great way to help him see how this effects his reading on a daily bases.
- Thanks to you, now I have a better image of how a graph may benefit him.
- I've made a few edits.
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Hi,
Excellent description and understanding of the unit assignment, you have gotten your point across, using diabetes as your everyday encounter, and it is very clear what links exist between the two.
This is an interesting choice because my father has diabetes, and I never thought about using a graph to show him, how the pros an
Excellent description and understanding of the unit assignment, you have gotten your point across, using diabetes as your everyday encounter, and it is very clear what links exist between the two.
This is an interesting choice because my father has diabetes, and I never thought about using a graph to show him, how the pros an
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