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ElectraKizz Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Hello, can you please help me improve this long sentence. I am really having problems here and need by midnight tonight....
While I do agree that along with knowledge of their own industry, strategists also need to understand the trends of complimentary industries, I still strongly disagree with the notion of your example which at one place suggested that factory machinery can sometimes be entirely dependent on computer technology which is so difficult to upgrade that factories have to close down because of it.
THANK YOU!!
While I do agree that along with knowledge of their own industry, strategists also need to understand the trends of complimentary industries, I still strongly disagree with the notion of your example which at one place suggested that factory machinery can sometimes be entirely dependent on computer technology which is so difficult to upgrade that factories have to close down because of it.
THANK YOU!!
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Don't try to make it all one sentence. " I believe you want complementary not complimentary. " Your example suggests...
- Don't try to make it all one sentence.
- " I believe you want complementary not complimentary.
- " Your example suggests...
- and then you lose me.
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Don't try to make it all one sentence.
Put a comma after your first "that." I believe you want complementary not complimentary. Try ending the first sentence after "your example." Your example suggests... and then you lose me.
Put a comma after your first "that." I believe you want complementary not complimentary. Try ending the first sentence after "your example." Your example suggests... and then you lose me.
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