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Ed73 Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Need Alternatives

Hi, I would appreciate if you could give me some alternatives sentence to this:

" It will be in your best interests if your own attorney takes charge of the negotiations and I am present to advise."

Thanks.

Ed
  

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Hi Ed, That sentence is fine. Alternatives: 1) It will be in your best interests if your attorney takes charge of the negotiations and I am present to advise. deleted "own" 2) Your attorney, with my assistance, should lead the negotiations.

— MountainHiker

  • Hi Ed, That sentence is fine.
  • Alternatives: 1) It will be in your best interests if your attorney takes charge of the negotiations and I am present to advise.
  • deleted "own" 2) Your attorney, with my assistance, should lead the negotiations.
  • assistance can be replaced with guidance, advice, or help MountainHiker
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Hi Ed,

That sentence is fine.

Alternatives:

1) It will be in your best interests if your attorney takes charge of the negotiations and I am present to advise.

deleted "own"

2) Your attorney, with my assistance, should lead the negotiations.

assistance can be replaced with guidance, advice, or help

MountainHiker
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Hi MH,

Thank you.

Ed
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