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Adviseeker Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Need advice on a sentence, thx soooo much! quite urgent! =)

Hello everyone,

Please advise if the sentence below is grammatically correct. Does it need fine-tuning?

Many, many thanks for helping!


Being able to return to school to obtain a degree would definitely be an enormous shot in the arm for me.



  

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There's nothing wrong with it. I might suggest a substitute for "enormous": significant, helpful, great. "Obtain" might be replaced by "earn", which is a little more common.

— Philip

  • There's nothing wrong with it.
  • I might suggest a substitute for "enormous": significant, helpful, great.
  • "Obtain" might be replaced by "earn", which is a little more common.
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There's nothing wrong with it.

I might suggest a substitute for "enormous": significant, helpful, great.

"Obtain" might be replaced by "earn", which is a little more common.
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Many thanks for your advice, Philip! G'day!
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