Perhaps you could make it shorter and be more effective. Here is an example: Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of Game Tester/QA – at *** YY inZZ, France. This position would fulfill my lifelong dream in becoming an active participant in creating and improving MMORPG games.
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