Need advice / A proofreader

Hi I came from Bali Indonesia , so gutys i need a little help here , for educational reason i would like to improving my english writting skills so i made a short essay about a local dog Breeds from Bali

Would you enjoy it and i really really need suggestion on grammar , and the content of essay itself

your comment and correction are highly appreciated

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Kintamani Dog Breed and what you should know about it

If you are looking for a new type of dog breed ,maybe a Kintamani's Dog its one breeds that you are looking for . Originally from Bali Indonesia . This dog breeds came with obviously a thick fur , which as a common characteristic of High Mountain dog. And further more about its physical appearance, Kintamani dog its usually known with its good posture, apricot type ears and cute fox looking face

Kintamani dog itself sometimes could be territory aggressive but also could be very friendly and loyal to its own family . But generally kintamani its mostly used as a home guard . Back to its origins in Bali island

Since the Kintamani recognized as one and the only race from Indonesia . Bring the Kintamani directly from the island its not a best choice .the beaucracy its so dull and almost takes forever to being permitted by local government. The only alternative its looking for a foreign Kintamani's breeder's personaly and giving a try to persuade them . So happy hunting and All Hail Kintamani !