Need a native speaker for sentences having to do with everyday life

Hello all teacher,

First of all, I'd like to thank you all for everything you do here, it is very nice.

I'm not sure how is expressed these phrases as they use specfic terms or its not the right turn of phrase.

How do you write it?

1. Temps get paid more than company employees because a temps salary includes his yearly paid vacation whereas an employee doesn't get paid his vacation, he takes his vacation.

2. My insurance doesn't reimburse any expenses incurred by the insuree that's over a year old. If you haven't sent your insurance company a bill that's over a year old, don't bother sending it.

3. She is undergoing surgery tomorrow. "What does she have?" or "What's wrong with her?"

4. Now that she's a little older, it's not as easy going shopping with her. It's a lot harder to keep her entertained while us grown ups shop for clothes.

5. My phones bank application is more up to date than an atm. The application has a more up to date balance of my account than when I ask for my balance at an atm.

6. "Even He's nicer than you." or "He's even nicer than you."

7. If you don't want to get embarrassed in front of her, don't start with me.

If you don't want to embarrass yourself in front of her, don't start with me.

8. You'll never find anything for that cheap.

You'll never find anything for that little.

Thank you too all the people for the time you put.