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MarieAndree1541 Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Need a little help for this paragraph:

As I was exploring CSG’s website, I became increasingly interested. It seems that your company is quite state-of-the-art with real estate marketing. It would be interesting for me to ceate graphical tools in relation with real estate. I developed a javascript game that can help user selecting styling options to decorate a living room, which could probably be applied to a home builder’s website. The game in question can be seen on my website which the url is provided below.
  

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As I was exploring CSG’s website, I became increasingly interested. It seems that your company is quite I see from your website that CSG is a state-of-the-art with rea l-e state marketing firm . It would be interesting for me to ceate graphical tools in relation with real estate.

— Teechr

  • As I was exploring CSG’s website, I became increasingly interested.
  • It seems that your company is quite I see from your website that CSG is a state-of-the-art with rea l-e state marketing firm .
  • It would be interesting for me to ceate graphical tools in relation with real estate.
  • I have developed a J ava S cript game that can help use rs selec t ing styling options to decorate a living room, which could probably be applied would be a helpful feature on to a hom e-b uilder’s website.
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As I was exploring CSG’s website, I became increasingly interested. It seems that your company is quite I see from your website that CSG is a state-of-the-art with real-estate marketing firm. It would be interesting for me to ceate graphical tools in relation with real estate. I have developed a JavaScript game that can hel
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Teech's suggestions are valuable.

I just want to confirm if it is OK to write Contact me without Please in formal writing -- I mean, where I live it, a phrase like this would be considered impolite.

Thanks,

Tom
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