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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Need a help with a Complaint letter/Homework
I wonder if you guys can take a look on this complaint letter to the ticket company that i wrote and tell me if it's correct.
(Teacher said we don't have to put the date, adresses etc.)
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to inform you of my dissatisfaction with incompetence of your company.
On March 28th I ordered two tickets for the Muse concert in your internet store. The concert was scheduled for 1st April but i did not recieve tickets until 3rd April. Furthermore, I rang your company three times before 1st April and every single time I was assured by your customer service that the tickets would arrive on time.
As a result, I missed the concert and i spent money for useless tickets that were pretty expensive. Therefore I request a full refound to the amount of $130. If these conditions are not met, I am afraid i may be forced to take legal action ( i know that warning is optional)
I look forward to hearing from you shortly.
Yours faithfully
xyz
Any synonyms to word "ticket"
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(Teacher said we don't have to put the date, adresses etc.)
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to inform you of my dissatisfaction with incompetence of your company.
On March 28th I ordered two tickets for the Muse concert in your internet store. The concert was scheduled for 1st April but i did not recieve tickets until 3rd April. Furthermore, I rang your company three times before 1st April and every single time I was assured by your customer service that the tickets would arrive on time.
As a result, I missed the concert and i spent money for useless tickets that were pretty expensive. Therefore I request a full refound to the amount of $130. If these conditions are not met, I am afraid i may be forced to take legal action ( i know that warning is optional)
I look forward to hearing from you shortly.
Yours faithfully
xyz
Any synonyms to word "ticket"
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Anonymous with incompetence of your company This is too confrontational. Be nicer if you wish a nice response. Anonymous 1st April April 1st ; write it as you would speak it.
- Anonymous with incompetence of your company This is too confrontational.
- Be nicer if you wish a nice response.
- Anonymous 1st April April 1st ; write it as you would speak it.
- Anonymous i !!
- Anonymous refound ??
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Anonymouswith incompetence of your companyThis is too confrontational. Be nicer if you wish a nice response.
Anonymous1st AprilApril 1st; write it as you would speak it.
Anonymousi!!
Anonymousrefound??
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Mister MicawberAnonymous1st AprilApril 1st; write it as you would speak it.What's important here is to write dates in a consistent way. The OP should either write all the dates in the letter the American way, with the month before the day, as in April 1st; or, the non-American way, with the day before the month, as in 1st of April.
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