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Nhatminh12369 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Need a help for my paragraph
I'm a newbie in this forum and I don't know where i can post a paragraph for check mistake in it. 
Can you check mistake in my paragraph for me?
This is my paragraph:
"Now, I will introduce to you about a game for Symbian OS (Nokia Phone). This game is my idea in Nokia Competition organize in University of Technology (Viet Nam). I named it is Smart Ball. This game is about a ball fall down from the infinite and the mission of the player is put some object below the ball how to the ball roll to the hole in the ground."
I'm learning writting English. Can you help me a hand? Thanks.
Can you check mistake in my paragraph for me?
This is my paragraph:
"Now, I will introduce to you about a game for Symbian OS (Nokia Phone). This game is my idea in Nokia Competition organize in University of Technology (Viet Nam). I named it is Smart Ball. This game is about a ball fall down from the infinite and the mission of the player is put some object below the ball how to the ball roll to the hole in the ground."
I'm learning writting English. Can you help me a hand? Thanks.
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Hello, nhatminh - and welcome to English Forums. Now, I will introduce you to a game for Symbian OS (Nokia Phone). This game was my idea in a Nokia competition organized at the University of Technology (Viet Nam).
- Hello, nhatminh - and welcome to English Forums.
- Now, I will introduce you to a game for Symbian OS (Nokia Phone).
- This game was my idea in a Nokia competition organized at the University of Technology (Viet Nam).
- I named it Smart Ball.
- This game consists of a ball falling down from the infinite , and the mission of the player is to put some object below the ball so that it rolls into a hole in the ground.
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Hello, nhatminh - and welcome to English Forums.
Now, I will introduce you to a game for Symbian OS (Nokia Phone). This game was my idea in a Nokia competition organized at the University of Technology (Viet Nam). I named it Smart Ball. This game consists of a ball falling down from the infinite, and the mission of the
Now, I will introduce you to a game for Symbian OS (Nokia Phone). This game was my idea in a Nokia competition organized at the University of Technology (Viet Nam). I named it Smart Ball. This game consists of a ball falling down from the infinite, and the mission of the
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