Need a comment and correction

hello all,

please suggest some corrections or improvement to the following lines.

regards

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The whole night
in that very dark night..
I was watching that star.
it was still, very still..
at the same place
for the thousands of year..
but I was filled with
a storm,
and a lot of questions.
..and no single answer,
the darker was the night.

more was the shining of the star.
but that light of the million glitters
was not sufficient,
to recognise a human face
and I realise,
how painful it is to be alone.
and to be misunderstood..
I raise my hand to touch
that single star
which was very far..
and there was a drop
of tear in my eyes
and that time
how I forget
that boys do'nt cry!

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