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Hi.. friends... I wrote following in response to a question " What motivated you to apply for Master MEDEG and what do you expect from this programme? (max 500 words)"

Would anyone go through this and advise me for an improvement before I submit it.
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To start with I would like to mention some background information about myself, my education and my ultimate goal.
I was born and raised in a small village of a rural area of Bangladesh. In the situation of grate difficulty of my family I started going to school and get my parent's inspiration continuously to be highly educated and to contribute to the society. But my education was about to stop when I was a student of class eight because of my father's death. Then my brother let my study continue and I completed my secondary school certificate from my village school and moved to Dhaka to get admitted into a higher secondary college.
After the completion of my honors final exam , I assign my personal strengths and skills as well as my career ambitions to think about which program or university fits best with me. Also, I thought about which university I would fit best to. Subsequently, I came across the Erasmus Mumdus through internet and found it appropriate for me.
There are quite a few factors that motivated me to apply for Masters MEDEG. These are precisely described as follows.
A specific reason why the Erasmus Mundus Programs is perfect to me as it is organized by three top class European universities. Moreover, the courses and topics it encompasses i.e. economical change, inequality, innovation, economic demography etc. are exactly those I want to work in. As I perceived from the academic and social endeavors that, I must have to have copious aptitude to establish a strategy of general economic equilibrium, business leadership and bring positive economic change. And the Masters MEDEG will sufficiently generate these phases of education. And another fact is being acquainted with different cultures and customs as well as different estimations and perceptions parallel strongly to my nature.
The high standard of education of the program is also another significant reason behind my preference. The schooling of Masters MEDEG is respected globally for its multidisciplinary methodology. I think this fact generally attracts everyone who likes to put contribution in national and international economy. In addition the wide range of top partner universities and student's complex provides higher possibilities of better education.
I learned after considering the program and its courses that it can provide me high ratio of employability at both national and international workplaces. And the overwhelming career opportunity enhances my motivation at an advanced pace. Farther more, reducing financial disparity and generating economic change and bringing equality among the mass people of third world countries is my ultimate goal for which this program will be very ideal and productive.
To sum up, I like to take the obligation and work in a group to bring the best result and economic leadership. I am highly motivated and willing to put myself forward for obtaining a satisfactory outcome. I believe that the Masters MEDEG bids one of the best education and chance of my personal improvement so as to contribute in the national development.
Md. Masof Hossain