New technology is always beneficial for the world, but sometimes it is not a brilliant idea. I think the computer was the one of the second technologies out there. It has a tremendous influence in my life, because of all of my online homework, my emails, and stuff like that. Often people do not understand that they can get hacked, or individuals can remove all their data just to mess with them. The advantages of being on a computer are unique in many ways because of all the information someone can look up. They always get upgraded often because there is always new ones that are better than others. I am going to study for computers because they make an impact on the world. One great advantage of having a computer would be because of the business you're in. Another one would be,wanting to talk to a family member in another state or country so you can video chat them. There is so many positive advantages of a computer. The disadvantages are anyone can get hacked meaning someone or anyone can look through all your data without you even noticing. Anyone can get a virus and it deletes everything and anything on it. I say all this because it has happened to me, except the hacking part. My computer had deleted all my documents, pictures, and music. It sucked a lot, not getting any of it back because of a slow virus I had. Now, I use Norton's Internet Security, and I have not had that problem anymore. Anyone is allowed to get the anti virus so nothing terrible will happen. It's an amazing software for countering the attacks of viruses. Problems with computers can be a condition every time, but how someone deals with it is up to them. I feel like it was a problem when it came out because it needed many more improvements back then. When years went by, they improved the computer more. There was so many problems back then, but now it's one of the best technologies in the world.
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