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Ilma Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Ned your opinion about my poem, especialy grammatical one :P, thx

When i feel there is no more way to walk through
I always need to remember You
Suddenly, You seems so close to me You will come soon,
As fast as the light
As close as my heart beat

Suddenly,
I feel your existence
Suddenly,
I feel peace Suddenly..
Just because of You
  

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Hello The second sentence, does it mean like it is necessary to remember you, or is it of the sense " I will always think of you ", and also the word remember sounds kinda odd. KRK

  • Hello The second sentence, does it mean like it is necessary to remember you, or is it of the sense " I will always think of you ", and also the word remember sounds kinda odd.
  • KRK
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Hello

The second sentence, does it mean like it is necessary to remember you, or is it of the sense " I will always think of you ", and also the word remember sounds kinda odd.

KRK

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