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Alc24 Posted 14 years ago
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Natural way to say this ? Please Native help me

How would put this?

Her shopping addiction has gotten worse as she's made more money.
Her shopping addiction has gotten worse the more she's made money.
The more she's made, the worse her shopping addiction has gotten.



Her shopping addiction has gotten worse in direct relation to her wealth.

Her shopping addiction is in direct relation/proportion to her wealth. The richer she gets the more her addiction.



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Use the very first sentence.

  • Use the very first sentence.
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Use the very first sentence.
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Is this one not correct?

The more she's made, the worse her shopping addiction has gotten.


How would you say these 2 please Philip?


Her shopping addiction has gotten worse in direct relation to her wealth.

Her shoppin
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alc24Is this one not correct?The more she's made, the worse her shopping addiction has gotten. How would you say these 2 please Philip? Her shopping addiction has gotten worse in direct relation to her wealth.Her shopping addiction is in direct relation/proportion to her wealth. The richer she gets the more her addiction.Thanks
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