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Lucas21c Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Natural sentence

Could you tell me which one is better between A and B in the following sentence sounds fine?
Thank you.

The diplomatic strategies of the U.S. and China toward Southeast Asia reveal a confrontational aspect

A. in terms that their strategies are premised on the assumption that they should deter mutual strategic goals.
B. from the point that their strategies are premised on the assumption that they should deter mutual strategic goals.
  

Top answer

Hi, I don't like any of this text at all. Where did you find it? Is it from some kind of test?

  • Hi, I don't like any of this text at all.
  • Where did you find it?
  • Is it from some kind of test?
  • What does it mean to say that two countries ' deter mutual strategic goals '?
  • Clive
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Hi,

I don't like any of this text at all. Where did you find it? Is it from some kind of test?

What does it mean to say that two countries 'deter mutual strategic goals'?

Clive
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I tranlated my original text into Englsih by myself.
The 'deter mutual strategic goals' means the U.S. tries to deter China's strategic goals in Southeast Asia while China tries to deter the U.S.'s strategic goals in the same region.
Here are my revised sentences.
If you still didn't like them, could you paraphrase them with your own words?
Thank you.

The diplomatic st
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Hi, I revised it once more.
Please confirm the following one.
Thank you.

The diplomatic strategies of the U.S. and China toward Southeast Asia assume a opposing aspect in the way that their strategies suppose that they deter the mutual strategic goals.
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You are saying too much, in a confusing and repetitive way. I suggest simply this.

The U.S. and China have conflicting strategies towards Southeast Asia.

Clive

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