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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
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Could you tell me whether the following sentence sounds fine?
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Neoliberalists argue deregulation helps both consumers and industries and removing controls on the free market creates opportunities for new businesses; increased competition leads to lower prices for consumers.
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Neoliberalists argue deregulation helps both consumers and industries and removing controls on the free market creates opportunities for new businesses; increased competition leads to lower prices for consumers.
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It could be made clearer, and the punctuation needs a change: Neoliberalists argue that deregulation helps both consumers and industries and that removing controls on the free market creates opportunities for new businesses : increased competition leads to lower prices for consumers.
- It could be made clearer, and the punctuation needs a change: Neoliberalists argue that deregulation helps both consumers and industries and that removing controls on the free market creates opportunities for new businesses : increased competition leads to lower prices for consumers.
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It could be made clearer, and the punctuation needs a change:
Neoliberalists argue that deregulation helps both consumers and industries and that removing controls on the free market creates opportunities for new businesses: increased competition leads to lower prices for consumers.
Neoliberalists argue that deregulation helps both consumers and industries and that removing controls on the free market creates opportunities for new businesses: increased competition leads to lower prices for consumers.
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