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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Natural expression

Could you tell me whether the following sentence sounds fine?
Thank you.

Your being defines my being and my being defines yours. Without me, you can not find out who you are.
  

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It sounds a little hippy-dippy, but the grammar is OK.

  • It sounds a little hippy-dippy, but the grammar is OK.
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It sounds a little hippy-dippy, but the grammar is OK.
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How can I make it sound more academic? Could you give me one suggestion?
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It's not an academic statement or concept, lucas—it is from one lover to another, and as such is fine as it is...if she will have any of it.

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