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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
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Could you check whether the following sentence sounds natural?
If not, please correct it though it may be grammatically correct.
Thank you.

We drive our children into excessive competition in the college entrance examinations, value them solely with their grade, and are interested only in the reputation of the schools which people have graduate from, not by who they really are.
  

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Hi, We drive our children into excessive competition in the college entrance examinations, value them solely with their grade, and are interested only in the reputation of the schools which people have graduate from, not by who they really are. I suggest eg We force our children into excessive competition in the college entrance examinations, and value them solely by their grades. We are only interested in the reputation of the schools people graduate from, not in who they really are.

— Clive

  • Hi, We drive our children into excessive competition in the college entrance examinations, value them solely with their grade, and are interested only in the reputation of the schools which people have graduate from, not by who they really are.
  • I suggest eg We force our children into excessive competition in the college entrance examinations, and value them solely by their grades.
  • We are only interested in the reputation of the schools people graduate from, not in who they really are.
  • Clive
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Hi,

We drive our children into excessive competition in the college entrance examinations, value them solely with their grade, and are interested only in the reputation of the schools which people have graduate from, not by who they really are.

I suggest eg

We force our children into excessive co
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