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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Natural Expression
Could you tell me whether the following sentence sounds natural?
If it says in an impolite or rude way, please tell me how I can make it better.
Thank you.
Your presentation is well organized, but seems to miss out a little on elements arousing audience’s interest.
If it says in an impolite or rude way, please tell me how I can make it better.
Thank you.
Your presentation is well organized, but seems to miss out a little on elements arousing audience’s interest.
Top answer
Your presentation is well organized, but it will not hold the audience’s interest.
- Your presentation is well organized, but it will not hold the audience’s interest.
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Your presentation is well organized, but it will not hold the audience’s interest.
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Thank you for your answer. Could you tell me whether the following one is also possible?
Your presentation is well organized, but I am a little concerned that it might not hold the audience's interest.
Your presentation is well organized, but I am a little concerned that it might not hold the audience's interest.
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