He tried to hang himself in his basement, but luckily the pipes he'd tied the rope on had broken under his weight, so nothing happened.
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He tried to hang himself in his basement, but luckily the pipes he'd tied the rope on had broken under his weight, so nothing happened. Here is natural English, He tried to hang himself in his basement, but luckily the pipes he tied the rope to broke under his weight, so nothing happened. you may also 'highlight' a part of the text and press 'Quote'
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He tried to hang himself in his basement, but luckily the pipes he'd tied the rope on had broken under his weight, so nothing happened.
Here is natural English,
He tried to hang himself in his basement, but luckily the pipes he tied the rope to broke under his weight, so nothing happened.
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