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Angelo D'Amario Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing

Native English speakers needed: curriculum feedback

Dear friends, my name is Angelo and I am an agronomist from Italy, I am sending since long time my CV to international recruiters, anyway I don't get so many good feedbacks, even if I have many technical working experinces.

So I thought that in my cover letter or in my CV there is something wrong...

Could you please help me?

Here you can find my cv:
www.movimentiterraforcella.it/angelo/angelo.doc

Here you can find my cover letter:
www.movimentiterraforcella.it/angelo/motivationAngelo.pdf

Thank you in advance for your suggestions.

Angelo
  

Top answer

I had a look at your cover letter. I think that picture is not formal. Your font is not formal, and I could see some grammatical mistakes.

— Nazanin saryazdi

  • I had a look at your cover letter.
  • I think that picture is not formal.
  • Your font is not formal, and I could see some grammatical mistakes.
  • Cover letters normally have Block style (indented to the left).
  • You should get sample cover letters from the Internet and ask someone to correct your mistakes.
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I had a look at your cover letter. I think that picture is not formal. Your font is not formal, and I could see some grammatical mistakes. Cover letters normally have Block style (indented to the left). You should get sample cover letters from the Internet and ask someone to correct your mistakes.
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