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Zer0c00l Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

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Does it sounds native ? if you notice any mistakes , please correct me .
Thank you .

It was good to see you last night .I knew you were tired so I didn't want to bother you and explain about the food that i am going to cook in the invitation day . The Soup that i am going to cook is an American Soup is called xxxx. The ingredients used are herbs such as parsley, spinach, dill, lentils, onions, garlic, oil, salt and pepper. I would like to make sure that you like the ingredients of this food , if you would not like the ingredients, please feel free to let me know ,we gonna try another food ,Thank you.
  

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zer0c00l Does it sounds native ? I knew you were tired so I didn't want to bother you and explain about the food that I am going to cook on invitation day . The Soup that I am going to cook is an American s oup is called xxxx.

  • zer0c00l Does it sounds native ?
  • I knew you were tired so I didn't want to bother you and explain about the food that I am going to cook on invitation day .
  • The Soup that I am going to cook is an American s oup is called xxxx.
  • The ingredients used are herbs such as parsley, spinach, dill, lentils, onions, garlic, oil, salt and pepper.
  • I would like to make sure that you like the ingredients of this dish; if you don't like the ingredients, please feel free to let me know , so we can try another food .
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zer0c00lDoes it sounds native ? if you notice any mistakes , please correct me .Thank you .It was good to see you last night .I knew you were tired so I didn't want to bother you and explain about the food that I am going to cook on invitation day . The Soup that
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zer0c00lmistakes ,
There's one right there. You are not consistently correct in your placement of punctuation marks. Place commas and periods directly after the preceding word without any space. Put a space after these punctuation marks.

mistakes , Wrong.
mistakes, Right.

such as pa
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Does it sound native?
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Anonymous Does it sound native?
I made several corrections, and I'm a native speaker.

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