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Alc24 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Native, could you please help correct

Could you please help correct these sentences please?

1 What is it about you that you always want to do that?

2 That's a hard angle to see. Look at it from a different angle.

3 That doesn't deserve/warrant a punishment.

4 If I don't get accepted in medical school, I don't know what I'll do.

5 Which store were you intending on calling. I think you have the wrong store? (talking on the phone to someone)

6 Insider trading is the selling or buying of stock based on knowledge not yet made public, thus giving the insider the advantage.

7 I'd become an actor just to be able to buy cars and houses.

Thank you so much
  

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1 What is it [about you] that makes you want to do that? to see it properly 3 either 4 ok 5 ? at end of first sentence, not the second 6 ok 7 ok

  • 1 What is it [about you] that makes you want to do that?
  • to see it properly 3 either 4 ok 5 ?
  • at end of first sentence, not the second 6 ok 7 ok
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1 What is it [about you] that makes you want to do that?
2 ...to see it properly
3 either
4 ok
5 ? at end of first sentence, not the second
6 ok
7 ok
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Philip, I'm wondering if you missed a few things?

2 That's a hard angle to see FROM???

4 get accepted TO medical school???

5 Which store were you INTENDING ON CALLING?? Is it correct to say intending on calling?

Thank you so much

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